That was a really well written 100wc I like how you made the hat disappear and reappear in different spots I also like the twist at the end.
I think you could work on adding paragraphs to space it out.
overall great post
I really like the humor in the story.
it is different to all the other 100wc i have read.
Overall I can not think of anything you can work on.
I like the post.
I like the way you used a crime scene as a setting.
I don’t get why the hat is on the table though.
I love the post and the way you talk about how the pizza place likes profit more than the safety of people.
One thing I think you could work on would be your word choice because were it says “I was disgust because” it should be disgusted.
overall good post