June 17

100wc

It was a disaster it was all my fault the domino bombs are bombing our land.

It was all my fault i grew the dominoes and they came to life.

The were a lot smarter than humans and the made atomic bombs.

The also discovered ho to work planes to drop bombs they then disguised themselves as statues.

They then just bombed everything it is total madhouse and everybody is forced to live in subway tunnels.

Its my fault which is why i’m in there plane wright now about to bomb the subways.

I’m a domino a big  one that grew the others.

 

 

 


Posted June 17, 2019 by charlie2017 in category Uncategorized

4 thoughts on “100wc

  1. matthewthr

    I like how you made a twist at the end.
    But the two sentences below don’t makes sense.
    1 The also discovered ho to work planes to drop bombs they then disguised themselves as statues.
    2 The were a lot smarter than humans and the made atomic bombs

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  2. addison2017

    I like how you made the story line although there were a few spelling errors. I also think you could have explained more about the dominoes. But I still like how the they bombed everywhere.

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  3. lachy2017

    Good 100 wc Christian. I like the descriptive words in your story but one of your sentences doesn’t make sense.

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  4. ccmizis

    Hi Charlie
    as Mathew commented, the above two sentences don’t make sense. There were also some sentences that were missing capital letters at the start. REMEMBER to edit your work before you publish. Most of your errors are careless that can be fixed if you edit your work.This would make your story easier to read.
    Chris

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